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  1. 2008.06.16 The person who changed my life. (2)
posted by 희정냥★ 2008. 6. 16. 17:19
아래는 제가 '실용영작문'이라는 교양 과목 시간에 제출했던 assignment 입니다.

Topic은 "The person who changed my life." 이고,

2줄간격으로, 2단락으로 나눠서, A4용지 한 바닥 분량만큼 쓰는 것이였습니다.

사실 별로 좋은 점수는 못받았어요.. ^-^;;;;

혹시 괜찮으시다면 조언해주시면 감사하겠습니다... ^-^;;;

Assignment 2. The person who changed my life.

My Senior

My life has been filled with many special people, but among all of them, my senior has been the most unique person in my life. When I was a freshman, I studied very hard. I attended many classes, study groups, and seminars, so I knew many seniors. I was especially interested in computers. I wanted to work on many computer projects. One of the my seniors said, "Work hard and challenge for a Samsung Software Membership!" He is a member of Samsung Software Membership, and I wanted to be part of that, too. This is a group of people who have good computer skills. I wanted to join this group, but it's very hard to pass the interview. I was worried and nervous. Above all, I didn't have confidence, but he encouraged me. He said, "You can do it!" He explained where to begin and how to prepare. He bolstered my courage.  So I challenged Samsung Software Membership after 1 year, and I passed. I was very happy.

When I met him in the Samsung Software Membership building, he said, "Work hard and challenge the Samsung Project!" The people who do Samsung Projects get not only good experience but also a lot of money. If someone wants to do Samsung Project, they must have outstanding abilities. Those cases are rare. I really wanted to do a Samsung Project, so I made every effort to achieve this. Finally, I took care of a Samsung Project. My continuous efforts resulted in a good success. He patted me on the back. Now I am taking care of a second Samsung Project. Thanks to his words of encouragement, I got everything I wanted.

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  1. BlogIcon 몽구스 2008.07.26 15:55  Addr  Edit/Del  Reply

    잘 읽었습니다. ^^ 조언이라기 보다는 제 생각을 말씀 드리자면, 그 분으로 인해서 어떤 영향을 받았고, 삶이 어떻게 바꼈는지 구체적으로 서술 되었더라면 더 좋았을것 같아요. 그리고 그 사건에 대해서도 좀 더 임팩트한 묘사가 있었으면(전국의 날고 긴다는 수재들도 수두룩하게 탈락한다든지.. ㅋ) 좀 더 읽는 재미가 있지 않을까 하는 생각이 드네요.

    근데 20대의 나이에 삶을 바꿨다고 할 만한 사건이나 인물이 있는 사람이 몇이나 될지... ㅎ 차라리 롤모델에 대해서 쓰라고 했으면 좀 더 재밌는 글이 나왔을것 같네요.